She searched her heart,
She searched her soul,
She couldn’t find the words,
Cause around him she always loses control.
She tried to make her feelings translate,
But when she went to speak she stumbled,
As the words somehow got in the way,
And her brain seemed completely jumbled.
But there were no worries,
No cause for distress,
There wasn’t a need for words,
The look in her eyes showed her feelings the best.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!
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Thank you Belinda! I really appreciate it! 🙂
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My pleasure indeed! Jarrod, you outdid yourself, heart and soul was clearly expressed in this piece. It moved me.
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Thank you! That is high praise from such a talented writer! I am honored!
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I am deeply humbled my friend. Your writing amazes me.
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Thank you! I am always honored to have you read and comment on my writings! 🙂
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My hands in illness have been giving me problems. lack of comments does not equate lack of admiration. huge hugs
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I keep you in my thoughts. I know some days are better than others for you. I am thankful the illness has not affected your sweet disposition or your ability to share with us your wonderful writings.
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I weep. You have deeply touched my soul this night. thank you for that gift. Huge smiles and hugs.
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It is my pleasure. It is an honor to have you as a friend. Be well! 🙂
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Wow! Gorgeous piece!
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Wonderful post, Jarrod! The photo, the words and the images they evoke all produce a beautiful result. Kudos 🙂
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words. I was actually just telling someone that I love the photo because of the way her eyes stand out in it. I didn’t take it. I wish I could say I did. But I think that the imagery really goes with the writing very well and actually, together, they really make the piece what it is.
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The photo is perfect for the writing!
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I agree! 🙂
It is magic when everything comes together like that!
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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beautiful!
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Thank you!
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